tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3314986147498806182.post4347651292225969851..comments2015-06-07T14:19:50.683-07:00Comments on Kari's European Blog: Nick VerreosKarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04473621391394552160noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3314986147498806182.post-58335425362494070172009-07-20T13:46:11.445-07:002009-07-20T13:46:11.445-07:00Kari,
You work in a great deal of material here, w...Kari,<br />You work in a great deal of material here, which is good. It doesn't read long - you have a nice, breezy style.<br />To make such postings more journalistic, you need to work hard to get details, anecdotes and quotes. <br />For example, his belt was from what designer? What kind of shoes did he wear? Name of Nick's design firm? Why is the Polimoda relevant in the European fashion world?<br />Nick had a few humorous sayings you could have used as examples of the way he talks. He also told funny stories about both Heidi Klum and Seal that you could relate.<br />Just some things to work on....Annie-Laurie Blairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14462072721139214536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3314986147498806182.post-85813312551743795852009-07-15T05:44:58.581-07:002009-07-15T05:44:58.581-07:00Thanks for this great article, Kari!Thanks for this great article, Kari!LauraKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12592353267304087555noreply@blogger.com